Key+Frameworks+-+PROPOSAL

Key Frameworks - Proposal Hi Tara. Your section looks good! It was hard to pare it down, I am sure....A few things to look into re: APA and stuff....

I think Biology in the first paragraph should not be capitalized. It is not name of the course. Same thing with Teacher's guide... I agree Emily - I was concerned about that. I will open the APA guide and look at everything else before making the changes. They sound right. You have a page citation at the end of your first page (Duffy & Cunningham). If you are not using direct quotes, I don't think you need to reference the page number.

I also made reference to the teacher's guide in the interactivities section, although in a bit of different context than you. Should we keep both?

I'm confused by the "Snow, 2002; as cited by Hollenback, 2011" reference midway thorugh page 2. Is this one reference or two seperate ones? If so, I don't think there should be a semi-colon inbetween those. ME too, Danielle - I am going to remove the ";" because I think it should be Snow, 2002, as cited in Hollenback 2011 - Snow was in Hollenback, correct?

I think for your second reference to the National Institute of Child Health and Human Development on page two, that you can just put NICHD, since you've already made reference to its abbreviation above. - I looked it up, I also think we can abbreviate this.

These are all things I think you should look into, as I am not 100% but they seem to be things I remember from my last paper that I did APA.

I put the indented long form quotation back in - I read twice if a direct quotation is more than 40 words indent it, keep double space formatting and source it after the closing punctuation mark.